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Thursday, 2 August 2018

my perfect punctaution

In my writing group this term we have been learning to do punctuation like speech marks and apostrophes. I wrote a story that was about meerkats, here is my story!


The Meerkats felt excited to eat the peach. They shouted, “Yum yum.” But they were afraid of a mean eagle, and the eagle saw the meerkats looking at the sweet, juicy and yummy fruit. So the eagle grabbed the fruit and flew away, the leader meerkat said, “Attack the evil eagle go go!” So the meerkats started running as fast as a cheater,  then one of the meerkats jumped on the eagle’s tail and grabbed the peach but then it fell out of the eagle’s claws and it went up and up then it fell on the ground it was squishy with the juice all over the ground they felt so so sad and angry at the eagle. The end!

what is your favoutie punctaution?

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